Roll and Write

Today for writing we had to use our imagination. We got to roll the dice three times. The first time choose where our story takes place, the second one our main character and the third one the problem in the story.

I rolled 2,5,5.

Here is my story.

I was in the bathroom when a grumpy Principal came in. I said "look at this berry." He said grumpily "hand it over." He didn't even say please but I gave it to him anyway. I said to him "don't eat the berry I think it is poisonous" and he said "you are lying" and took a bite... He died. I stop washing  my hands and I went to my mum and I said  the grumpy Principal  has died so we brought a cold bottle of water and put it on his head. I got the phone and called 111 and the ambulance answered can you come to 58b Grumpy Road and they came as fast as they could. They said "whats wrong" "I was washing my hands and I said look at that berry and he said for me to pass it over and I said to him don't eat it. It might be poisonous and he didn't  believe me" I said. After I told them  they took him to the hospital and he had actually just fainted and he woke up. Luckily he didn't die.

Cave Poem

Glow worms

Glowing blue

Sparkling, shimmering, shinning

Look at my bottom 

Archnocampaluminosa

Cave writing plan

Here is my Thinglink.

A Moment in Time-Tabloids

I saw.... kids running as fast as cheetahs.                                                                                                                                                                
I heard..... kids roaring like a lion.

I felt....happy because I had lots of fun racing my friends in the sack race.

I wondered....if  I would be the anchor for the tug of war.

Character Description

 The Orton Ice Queen

The Orton Ice Queen loves white and she loves ice cream everyday she has ice cream. She has it for breakfast and morning tea and lunch and dinner.the Orton Ice Queen is covered in white with a fluffy jacket.  She turns everything into ice and is mean to her family. She lives in a tree house in the woods and she has heaps of blankets made from all the animals she has killed and her tree house is painted white with snow.the Orton Ice Queen has ice powers when people walk past her in the woods she turns them into ice and they never become unfrozen because there is no sun there because she love ice and after she has finished iceing you she eats you with the ice on you and it hors when she eat you her cote is as willy as a sheep wondor how cooled it is it might be cooled.

Evidence of achieving my writing goals

My writing goals are to use capital letters and full stops.

This shows that I have used my capital letters and full stops. I am still remembering to use them all of the time when I am writing.

To spell all of Essential Word Lists 1-4 right.
I have achieved lists 1-3. I am still working on learning some words in list 4.

My last writing goal is to plan my writing in different ways.

These pictures show different ways I am planning my writing.

Writing Warmup

Today for our writing warm up we had 5 minutes to write a story that used a boot, a pencil and a $5 note. This is my story.

One day I put my boot on and I had my $5 note and I went to the shop and in that shop I saw a magic  pencil and I loved it so much I brough it. It was mine forever.

WALT: Add detail to our writing.

The____ lady walked across the field _____

happy
angry
mad
surprised
sad
excited
cool
famous
busy


strolled
stomped
stormed
strode


talking on the phone
working

This is my new sentence.
The famous lady strolled across the field talking on the phone.