Monday, April 7, 2014

Cave Poem

Glow worms
Glowing blue
Sparkling, shimmering, shinning
Look at my bottom 
Archnocampaluminosa

2 comments:

  1. To Eva
    Wow I like how you have used the word archnocampaluminosa but I think you could of thought about the look at my bottom part and maybe used some more describing words.
    From Cloe

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  2. To Eva
    I like how you have used Archnocampaluminosa instead of glow worm and I like how you have used alliteration in the third line repeating the 's' sound.
    From Ella

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