To Eva Wow I like how you have used the word archnocampaluminosa but I think you could of thought about the look at my bottom part and maybe used some more describing words. From Cloe
To Eva I like how you have used Archnocampaluminosa instead of glow worm and I like how you have used alliteration in the third line repeating the 's' sound. From Ella
To Eva
ReplyDeleteWow I like how you have used the word archnocampaluminosa but I think you could of thought about the look at my bottom part and maybe used some more describing words.
From Cloe
To Eva
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used Archnocampaluminosa instead of glow worm and I like how you have used alliteration in the third line repeating the 's' sound.
From Ella